Demonic Icon Makes His Way to the ring With a mic in hand
Demonic get into the ring and Starts to talk into the mic
Fan's In the Crowd Half Cheer
Demonic Icon: Well Hello BWB Fan's I am the Demonic Icon Not many of you know me yet. But I am the newest Rookie on the roster. I know I am new but I am here to make an impact. I am here to make a name for my self. I will not let anyone get in my way. Now I am not to sure who is best, Suited for My Debut in this Great fed. So I figure I will call out the boss and ask him for a match.
The crowd Cheers
Commentary guy: Who does Demonic Icon Think he is? His first night on the Roster and already making Demands?
Commentary Guy: Well I am impressed so fan he can talk a big game but can he Back it up?
Demonic Icon: Well GM Sommerlund Please grace me with your greatness. Please tell me who is my first Fight is in BWB. I am looking foward to getting my hands dirty and to prove my self. So by all means Let Me know.
The Fans are not sure what to think of the Rookie.
Commentary Guy: Well Will Sommerlund Come out and give this rookie his debut match?
Commentary Guy: We will have to wait and see.
Off Role play
Let me know what you think of my first rp and if there is anything it is missing.
Last edited by Demonic Icon on Wed Jul 08, 2009 5:20 am; edited 1 time in total
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Subject: Re: Demonic Icon's Debut in BWB Wed Jul 08, 2009 5:16 am
Bump Any one read this yet? is it ok?
Cykill
Posts : 167 Join date : 2009-06-26 Age : 64 Location : Parts Unkown, United States
For starters DI, The video can't be used til next season hopefully. The description part of your intro and non-talking parts should all run together and in Italics. Don't seperate all the sentences. Find out what the color codes are for the commentators and use there names. Each commentator has a seperate color that will be uniformly used thru the whole show. All speaking parts will be colored, non-speaking parts will be in Italics. any other questions, feel free to ask me, I'll help you along.